what could i add on to this to make it better

aze sway high ground retakes

“Wall stair pyramid”!! Wait you're probably wondering what is he talking about well I will be telling you today. Hi my name is cooper and I will be telling you about how to build and become a pro at building in fortnite. 

Now there are different building settings they are called,builder pro,combat pro,old school,quick builder.And there is a thing called custom now with custom you can change what buttons to press to build.

On to the next. You are going to need to go onto whatever settings you feel comfortable on. It's going to take a while to learn how to build but after a while it will become natural for you. So if you are intrigued  with this you need to look at a guy called Faze sway. He's the best creative warrior out there.

Now if you play on controller it might be more easy then pc.

this is my retell story what do you think i should add onto it.

One sunny bright gleaming hot morning.The hunter dashed out of bed. The blind man shouted “stop running you will trip over” “sure sure”. Not even one second later he fell over. “Told you”. “Shut up xD” “I'm going out hunting see ya”. The blind man always wanted to go. Let me take you back to when they were kids.They had a strict vicious dad and he was very violent. If you got him mad you better run. One day Sam who is now the blind man.He begged him and begged him but his dad wouldn’t budge. He shouted “PLEASE!!!”. His dad out of anger whipped him with his belt in the face it had spikey bits for whipping they hit straight in his eyes. He was blind!. His dad left him laying bleeding in pain. 4 hours later they came back his brother ran to him crying he lifted his brothers head up and seen the disgusting site, something he never wished he had seen. His dad didn’t believe the site he saw. “911 whats your emergency?” “i need help right now. Anyways back to it. The hunter came back. “How was it”? “Could of gone better”. “What happened? “Didn’t catch anything”. “Let me go with you next time” NO” come on just one time” “fine”. The next day rolled by the blind man was up bright and early. They had a beautiful morning breakfast.”so can we go? “Yeah lets go’’. They were strolling through the scary spooky haunted house when out of nowhere a chair flys through the air crashing into bits. “AHHH” stop said the blind man. The hunter got salt and made a circle “it can’t get us if we are in there. They moved on anyway slowly creeping the blind man stopped “don't move there is a ghost about to run past”.”wait how did you know that”. The blind man kept walking. They set up cameras to get a video of a ghost. They came back the next day to see that the blind man got a really amazing video of a ghost that is so famous. The hunter was so jealous he swapped the cameras around. “Tell me brother Why is the world so bad and hurtful?”. It’s because of people like you that lie and try to get away with it” “how di..’’ just stop it’s okay” im sorry” the blind man said “its okay cause the world is a better place because people like you own up to their mistakes” they swapped back there cameras and went on to live the best life ever.

This is my snookle story do you think i should add anything else?

The Ghostly Shadow.

“AHHHHHHH’’ “What was that helppp!” ‘’What happened what's wrong’’ I seen something down there staring at me. Are you drunk again? No There was something there!.I'm going to have a look. Your for sure drunk. Nothing was there!. Two weeks go by harry never wanted to go back there ever again. He was walking around the park when. He saw a newspaper reports of people crying and running away. He was right this is proof that he seen something he grabbed it and left.running and not looking back at the guy shouting. “HEY GET BACK HERE THAT COSTS $2.50!.He finally got home when his brother seemed frighted. “What's wrong’’? The tv was on he was watching the news? “My name is Jeff Coal and today we will be talking about this strange thing thats going on in the park some Ghostly Shadow looking object” he couldn't believe it. “You were right after all”. “Thats what im saying”. The next day harry and his brother went to the park to investigate. Well not really harry. He was way too scared to even look at the park. That didn’t stop harry’s brother but he came to see that there were cops everywhere. Surrounding everything!. “Hey sir you can't go past anymore than where you are now” my brother came here and that so called ghost thing almost caught him!? “Im sorry to hear that but you can't go past sorry sir”. Harry's brother stomped off angrily. “What's wrong?” they blocked off that part were that ghost thing is by police!. Oh why? C……… At night harry's brother made a plan. He was going to sneak out at night and go there. With a jar and maybe catch it OMG it's freezing out here!. He dashed and zoomed and was there but to his surprise no cops were there he walked up to were the cops were. Stopped and looked he seen it’s just eyes. There were scary very scary he started running and chasing it he caught it in a jar. But wait the jar had milk in it. And he called it Snookle!

Fiji Superstitions!

This is my fiji superstition it was fun. we searched up facts and put them together into one slide i did this with Jaxon,Aiden,Josh. i'm exited to do more stuff like this. Thanks to mark  i was able to do this !.

Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga

Haere Mai, Talofa Lava, Mālō e Lelei , Maligayang Pagdating and welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.